[PATCH] Fix 5 more typos in the Etch Release Notes
Hi,
Here attached a patch to fix five more typos I find in the Etch
Release Notes. This should be the last typo fix at present. Could
you please apply it?
Thanks,
-nori
Index: en/release-notes.en.sgml
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RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/release-notes/en/release-notes.en.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.104
diff -u -r1.104 release-notes.en.sgml
--- en/release-notes.en.sgml 21 Nov 2006 08:06:49 -0000 1.104
+++ en/release-notes.en.sgml 23 Nov 2006 01:40:58 -0000
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@
the older stable Linux kernel series, you should upgrade to a 2.6
series kernel, as 2.4 is no longer supported in Etch.
If you are currently using a kernel from the 2.2 series, you
- must upgrade to (at least the 2.4 series, better to a 2.6 series
+ must upgrade to (at least) the 2.4 series, better to a 2.6 series
kernel prior to upgrading your packages.
<!-- TODO: incoporate this part in this section -->
Some issues associated with an upgrade to 2.6 are documented in
@@ -910,9 +910,9 @@
<sect1><heading>devfs deprecated</heading>
<p>Etch no longer provides support for <prgn>devfs</prgn>.
- It is recommended that users transition to udev for dynamic
+ It is recommended that users switch to udev for dynamic
<file>/dev</file> management.
- Debian kernels not longer include support for <prgn>devfs</prgn>,
+ Debian kernels no longer include support for <prgn>devfs</prgn>,
so <prgn>devfs</prgn> users will need to manually convert their
systems before upgrading to an etch kernel.</p>
@@ -952,7 +952,7 @@
in which device names are assigned.
For example, if you have two network adapters that are associated
with two different drivers, the devices eth0 and eth1 refer to
- maybe swapped.
+ may be swapped.
Please note that the new mechanism means that if you e.g. exchange
ethernet adapters in a running &releasename; system, the new adapter
will also get a new interface name.</p>
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@
</list></p></item>
<item><p>Edit <file>/etc/elilo.conf</file> to remove any "console="
- arguments<p></item>
+ arguments.<p></item>
<item><p>Run elilo to install the bootloader with new
configuration.</p></item>
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