Re: cvs commit to ddp/manuals.sgml/faq by toff
On Tue, May 21, 2002 at 01:26:52PM -0700, Debian Doc Project CVS Master wrote:
> Repository: ddp/manuals.sgml/faq
> who: toff
> time: Tue May 21 13:26:49 PDT 2002
>
> Log Message:
>
> typos, url updates, clarifications
Even though I dislike mass-commits for multiple changes, this was a good one :)
> basic_defs.sgml
-<p>The project name is pronounced Deb'-ian, with a short e, and emphasis on
+<p>The project name is pronounced Deb'-ee-en, with a short e in Deb, and emphas the first syllable. This word is a contraction of the names of Debra and
Ian Murdock, who founded the project. (Dictionaries seem to offer some
-ambiguity in the pronunciation of Ian (!), but Ian prefers ee'-an.)
+ambiguity in the pronunciation of Ian (!), but Ian prefers ee'-en.)
I'm no expert in how to write this stuff, but these things have been here
for years and I don't really see how the changes are an improvement...
> customizing.sgml
-<chapt id="customizing">Customizing your installation of &debian;
+<chapt id="customizing">Customizing your Installation of &debian;
Please don't do this.
> pkgtools.sgml
-<p>The kernel (filesystem) in &debian; systems supports replacing files even
+<p>The kernel (Filesystem) in &debian; systems supports replacing files even
This one I don't get :) You've properly fixed filesystem -> file system
everywhere else, why not here?
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