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Re: Bug#294754: ITP: ttf-arphic-newsung -- "AR PL New Sung" Chinese TrueType font by FireFly



On Fri, Feb 11, 2005 at 10:05:05PM +0800, Kanru Chen wrote:
> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> Owner: Kanru Chen <koster@debian.org.tw>
> 
> * Package name    : ttf-arphic-newsung
>   Version         : 1.2.6
>   Upstream Author : FireFly <firefly@firefly.idv.tw>
> * URL             : http://www.study-area.org/apt/firefly-font/
> * License         : APL(Arphic Public Licence)
IIRC, the bitmap in this font is under GPL. You should mention it.

>   Description     : "AR PL New Sung" Chinese TrueType font by FireFly
> 
>   "AR PL New Sung" is a high-quality Chinese TrueType font
>   (fireflysung.ttf) made by FireFly. It contained two font glyphs,
                                                    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
                                                    only two glyphs?
Should it be "two sets of glyph"?

>   simplified chinese and traditional chinese. This font combined AR PL
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Maybe you forgot the capitalization, at least in "Chinese". I think "s"
and "t" should also be capitalized.

>   Mingti, AR PL Sungti and FireFly's embbed bitmap font so it can have
                                       ^^^^^^
Did you mean "embedded"?

>   pretty nice look both at large size or small size.
                     ^^^^^^^            ^^
Should be "at both ... and ..."?

I'm not a native English speaker, so I could be wrong. Maybe someone
else will give you a better suggestion.

-- 
 Best Regards,
 Carlos



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