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Re: Bug#219163: ITP: synaptic-touchpad -- Synaptics TouchPad driver for XFree86

On Sun, Nov 09, 2003 at 03:12:19PM +0100, Mattia Dongili wrote:
> * Package name    : xfree86-driver-synaptics
> > Please be sure to mention in the package description that this is a
> > driver module *for* the XFree86 X server, not a driver module *from* the
> > XFree86 Project, Inc.
>   Description     : Synaptics TouchPad driver for XFree86

I recommend "Synaptics TouchPad driver for XFree86 X server".

>     An input driver for the XFree86 X server to enable advanced features
>     of the Synaptics Touchpad including:

This is a sentence fragment, no matter how many things you list next.

I suggest changing the beginning of the sentence to "This package
provides an input driver...".

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