Re: [mechanix@debian.org: Bug#169709: idesk: could use a better description]
On Thu, 2002-11-21 at 15:56, Thorsten Sauter wrote:
> Hi,
>
> anyone can agree that this is a little bit more clearer?
>
> <snip>
>
> Description: Display program shortcuts as icons on desktop
> With idesk you can define shortcut's for several programs
The apostophe is an error.
> and display these icons with a short description on the
> desktop of any window manager.
I'd just drop the "of any window manager".
> .
> It can use png images as icon source (including transparent
That should be "including transparency", and I'd capitalize PNG.
> support) and support antialised fonts to print the description.
This last bit is awkward, and has two typos; I would instead write:
...and supports using antialiased fonts for the description.
or maybe just
...and supports antialiased fonts.
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