On Fri, Oct 01, 1999 at 07:16:37PM +0900, Kenshi Muto wrote: > Package: actx > Version: 0.98pre8-2 You do realize that dpkg treats "0.98" as less than "0.98pre8", don't you? > Section: x11 This should probably go in "games" or maybe "graphics" depending on what a "window sitter" is. > Description: A Window Sitter Program on X > ActX is a window sitter program to make your life with X rich and > fruitful. It supports a helpful pop-up menu to modify configuration of > animation and more. Originally inspired with XAyanami, another window > sitter. The second, third, and fourth lines of the extended description should be indented one space. Also, the description doesn't actually tell me much. What is a "window sitter"? A baby sitter for windows? I do not understand. "to make your life with X rich and fruitful" either sounds like a joke or very bad advertising. If it is the latter it has no place in the package description, which needs to be informative. Instead of that second sentence, I would say "Animation and other configuration is done with a pop-up menu." "Originally inspired with" should probably be "Originally inspired by". But the most important thing is to tell the user what a "window sitter" is. I think I'm up on my jargon, but I don't know what you're talking about here. -- G. Branden Robinson | If you wish to strive for peace of soul, Debian GNU/Linux | then believe; if you wish to be a branden@ecn.purdue.edu | devotee of truth, then inquire. cartoon.ecn.purdue.edu/~branden/ | -- Friedrich Nietzsche
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