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Re: Debian GNU/Linux Reference Card under construction



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On Thursday 15 April 2004 12.34, W. Borgert wrote:

> 1. Please look at the card and point out any errors. 

 - apt-get [dist-]upgrade don't take packages

Comments:
 - apt-cache search pattern
	Does your intended audience know what you mean by 'pattern'?
 - apt-cache rdepends
	Same. I think usual dependencies are sort of intuitive enough to
	understand, but I'm not so sure about rdepends.
 - Is apt-file installed by default? If not, a pointer to the package to
	install would be helpful. (Same for other non-standard commands.)
 - deborphan
	As for apt-cache rdepends: To understand what an orphan is, a quite
	good understanding of package dependencies is needed.
 - what's the different between poweroff and halt? They're probably not
	both necessary.
 - postgresql: point to pg_hba.conf, and perhaps add how to change
	password for a user.
 - man: '... every command and many configuration files have a manpage.'
 - mailing lists: perhaps point directly to the user list?

Layout: Currently, many of the commands are wrapped, which makes them 
IMHO hard to read. Instead of

	apt-cache policy	Show versions and
	package-names		priorities...

I'd find it much better if it were

	apt-cache policy package-names: Show versions
	        and priorities...

(Something like an itemized list instead of a table). This would 
probably safe some space, too.

Of course, this is entirely a matter of taste.

greetings
- -- vbi

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