Re: CDDs creators working with Debian
Hm, I made some goofs. Here are further corrections.
On Wed, 2004-06-30 at 12:36, Ben Armstrong wrote:
> isn't' one already available which does what you need. See if you could
^
Ack. Missed this one. Strike the extra apostrophe:
isn't one already available ...
And this. Because the abbreviation ends a sentence, it should have a
second blank after the period, since that is the convention used
throughout the text. Thus:
> organizations, medicine, etc. A new Custom Debian Distribution specially
should be:
organizations, medicine, etc. A new ...
And finally, some mistakes with commas. This:
> cooperation between Brazil and the rest of the world, which in the end
> benefits everyone.
should be changed thusly:
cooperation between Brazil and the rest of the world which, in the end,
benefits everyone.
And I forgot to proof the endnotes. Please fix as follows:
> [1] Debian Free Software Guidelines :
^
remove extra blank before colon here, and in following points
> http://www.debian.org/social_contract#guidelines
>
> [2] Debian Policy :
> http://www.debian.org/doc/debian-policy/
>
> [3] CDD :
> http://wiki.debian.net/index.cgi?CustomDebian
>
> [4] Prospective Packages :
http://www.debian.org/devel/wnpp/
>
> [5] Debian Developers Mailing List :
^^^^^^^^^^
should be "Developers' Mailing Lists" (apostrophe for possessive, and
Lists plural because we are talking about the regional lists, not just
debian-devel).
Ben
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