On Thu, Aug 03, 2017 at 05:51:27PM +0200, Philip Hands wrote: > You appear to have a singular/plural mismatch with: > > installs a FreeDesktop desktop entries > > I guess that should instead be: > > installs FreeDesktop desktop entries > > (or perhaps it should be singular throughout, I'm not sure) Ooops, I meant singular throughout. > P.S. Just in case this is an oversight, rather than an intentional > change: > > Shouldn't "desktop entry" and "Debian menu entry" be somehow > emphasised, to make it clear that there is a reference back to the > earlier definition? > > If you meant to get rid of that, no problem. Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean. Are you referring to the paragraph I deleted? -- Sean Whitton
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