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Re: (fwd) Please review content squeeze release announement [tolimar@debian.org]

2011/2/2 Alexander Reichle-Schmehl <alexander@schmehl.info>:
> Hi!
> Sorry for forgetting you in my first mail, but here it comes:
> BTW:  You can find it at
> svn+ssh://svn.alioth.debian.org/svn/publicity/announcements/en/2011/2011-02-06-squeeze-announce.wml
> or
> https://alioth.debian.org/scm/viewvc.php/announcements/en/2011/2011-02-06-squeeze-announce.wml?root=publicity&view=log

I suggest this small change, otherwise the text seems to suggest that
FreeBSD is a kernel.

Robert Millan
Index: 2011-02-06-squeeze-announce.wml
--- 2011-02-06-squeeze-announce.wml	(revision 1540)
+++ 2011-02-06-squeeze-announce.wml	(working copy)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 <p>Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q> introduces technical previews of two new
-ports to the FreeBSD kernel using the known Debian/GNU userland:
+ports to the kernel of FreeBSD using the known Debian/GNU userland:
 Debian GNU/kFreeBSD for the 32-bit PC (<code>kfreebsd-i386</code>) and
 the 64-bit PC (<code>kfreebsd-amd64</code>). These ports are the first
 ones ever to be included in a Debian release which are not based on

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