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boot-installer accessability: edit in installation-guide



Hi Samuel,

I would like to recommend some proofreading for your latest installation-guide
commit.

I have added some formatting tags (like <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>) for the 
keystrokes and some other minor things (like avoiding the three-times use of
"just" in one sentence).

A diff is attached.


I can also push it, if you want.


Regards + Merry Christmas to you and your family!


Holger



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Holger Wansing <hwansing@mailbox.org>
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diff --git a/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml b/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml
index 6a305e95e..eab89cdd0 100644
--- a/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml
+++ b/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml
@@ -35,20 +35,22 @@ boxes.  The choice can be made at the boot prompt, see the documentation for
 </para><para>
 
 With the <userinput>newt</userinput> front-end (used mostly with braille), one
-mostly just selects answers with arrow keys, and one presses &enterkey; to
-validate the choice. Pressing &tabkey; and &shiftkey; - &tabkey; allows to
-switch between dialog elements, and notably to access the
-<userinput>Go Back</userinput> button with brings back again to previous
+mostly just selects answers with arrow keys and presses <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>
+to validate the choice. Pressing <keycap>&tabkey;</keycap> or
+<keycombo><keycap>&shiftkey;</keycap> <keycap>&tabkey;</keycap></keycombo>
+allows to switch between dialog elements, and notably to access the
+<userinput>Go Back</userinput> button, which brings back again to previous
 questions. Some dialogs contain check boxes, which can be ticked on and off by
-pressing &spacekey;.
+pressing <keycap>&spacekey;</keycap>.
 
 </para><para>
 
 With the <userinput>text</userinput> front-end (used mostly with speech), one
-mostly selects answers by typing their number followed by pressing &enterkey;.
-One can also just not type anything and just press
-&enterkey; to just accept the default value. Typing <userinput>&lt;</userinput>
-and pressing &enterkey; brings back again to previous questions. When a
+mostly selects answers by typing their number followed by pressing
+<keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>. One can also not type anything and just press
+<keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>, to simply accept the default value. Typing
+<userinput>&lt;</userinput> and pressing <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>
+brings back again to previous questions. When a
 selection of choices has to be made (e.g. during task selection), one can type
 <userinput>!</userinput> to express an empty selection.
 

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