On Tue, 2018-07-31 at 11:00 +0200, Holger Wansing wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Ben Hutchings <ben@decadent.org.uk> wrote:
[...]
> > I agree that this should be changed. However I think that the wording
> > "standard versions" also relates to there being unrestricted (standard)
> > and non-US versions of some packages.
> >
> > Perhaps "standard versions" could be changed to something like "the
> > &debian; system".
>
> So, that could look like this:
>
>
>
> diff --git a/en/post-install/orientation.xml b/en/post-install/orientation.xml
> index 0ec05037f..f3eb00bee 100644
> --- a/en/post-install/orientation.xml
> +++ b/en/post-install/orientation.xml
> @@ -59,10 +59,13 @@ around this by putting packages on <quote>hold</quote> in
> </para><para>
>
> One of the best installation methods is apt. You can use the command
> -line version of <command>apt</command> or full-screen text version
> -<application>aptitude</application>. Note apt will also let you merge
> -main, contrib, and non-free so you can have export-restricted packages
> -as well as standard versions.
> +line version of <command>apt</command> as well as tools like
> +<application>aptitude</application> or <application>synaptic</application>
> +(which are just graphical frontends for <command>apt</command>).
> +Note that apt will also let you merge
> +main, contrib, and non-free so you can have restricted packages
> +(strictly spoken not belonging to &debian;) as well as packages from
> +&debian-gnu; at the same time.
>
> </para>
> </sect2>
Looks good to me.
Ben.
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Ben Hutchings
[W]e found...that it wasn't as easy to get programs right as we had
thought. I realized that a large part of my life from then on was going
to be spent in finding mistakes in my own programs.
- Maurice Wilkes, 1949
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