Quoting Aliz 'Randomdude' (randomdude@gmail.com): > +Template: preseed/accept_preseed_from_DHCP > +Type: boolean > +Default: false > +_Description: Accept a preseed URL from the DHCP server? > + The DHCP server has provided extra commands or customisations to s/has provided/provided Better English, imho.... > + debian-installer via a preseed file. It is possible that these > + commands were set by the network administrator; however, it is > + impossible to verify this, or to ensure they have not been altered > + by an attacker who already has access to your local network. For > + this reason, you should only accept these customisations if you > + accept the risk they entail. s/your local network/the local network > Template: debian-installer/network-preseed/title > > I've made it slightly more verbose as well. Is this acceptable, or > should I solicit comments on debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org? It is always a good idea to ask for a review in debian-l10n-english..:-)
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