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Re: [RFC] Draft of announcement and errata, last chance of change

Excellent work!  A few things:

> Bellow goes the most important new features and improvements.

Bellow is a musical instrument - you mean below.

It might be better anyway to say "Here follows the most important ..."

> Many changes were done regarting packages selection and also:


> There're all the links you need and also the errata.

Probably better to say that "They include all the links you need - including
the errata" 

Best wishes


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