Re: Section about win32-loader in d-i manual
Holger Wansing <linux@wansing-online.de> writes:
> --- en/boot-installer/x86.xml 2008-03-04 20:35:57.000000000 +0100
> +++ en/boot-installer/x86-workingcopy.xml 2008-03-05 21:18:28.000000000 +0100
> @@ -202,11 +202,14 @@
> </para>
>
> <para>
> -If the medium is a CD-ROM or DVD-ROM, when you insert it and a pre-installation program
> -should be launched automatically. In case Windows doesn't start it, or you are using
> +If the medium is a CD-ROM or DVD-ROM, a pre-installation program
> +should be launched automatically when you insert the disc.
> +In case Windows doesn't start it, or you are using
> a USB Memory Stick medium, you can run it manually by accessing the device and
> executing <command>setup.exe</command>.
> +</para>
>
> +<para>
> When the program is started, it will ask a few preliminary questions and prepare the
> system to start the installer.
> </para>
For me, it looks fine. I'm not a good English speaker and then would
like that someone else commit on it but it does clarify the paragraph.
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