Re: r51573 - in trunk/manual: debian en/appendix
On Mon, Feb 25, 2008 at 10:43:39AM -0300, Otavio Salvador wrote:
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml (original)
> > +++ trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml Mon Feb 25 12:56:07 2008
> > @@ -37,6 +37,13 @@
> > types of installation and even offers some features not available during
> > normal installations.
> > +</para><para>
> > +
> > +Preseeding is not required. If you use an empty preseed file, the installer
> > +will behave just the same way as in a normal manual installation. Each
> > +question you preseed will (if you got it right!) modify the installation in
> > +some way from that baseline.
> > +
> > </para>
> > <sect2 id="preseed-methods">
> This looks confusing for me.
> What about this:
> Each question you preseed will (if you got it right!) modify the
> installation in some way from that baseline however preseeding is not
> required. If you use an empty preseed file, the installer will behave
> just the same way as in a normal installation.
This reads less well to me than the original; the use of "however" with
no preceding punctuation is particularly jarring, but the whole thing is
less straightforward and harder to read.
What in particular confused you about my text?
Colin Watson [firstname.lastname@example.org]