The ones not mentioned have been fixed. Thanks for the review. Cheers, FJP On Saturday 06 January 2007 13:08, Christian Perrier wrote: > Capitalization of "internet" should be consistent. I would > recommend using "Internet" Yes, but not something I really want to do right now in the soft freeze. > "The document you are now reading, which is a development version of > the Installation Guide for the next release of Debian; available in > various formats and translations > (http://d-i.alioth.debian.org/manual/)." > > This is not a sentence. No, but also not totally horrible in its context. Postponed till after the freeze. > ./preparing/bios-setup/i386.xml:utility. Often, it is the > <keycap>Delete</keycap> key. However, > > The "F2" key is also pretty common This whole section needs a thorough rewrite; not going to bother with this now. > ./preparing/minimum-hardware-reqts.xml: > It is possible to run a graphical desktop environment on older > or low-end systems, but in that case it is recommended to > install a window manager that is less resource-hungry than > those of the GNOME or KDE desktop environments; alternatives > include xfce4, icewm and wmaker, but there are others to choose > from. > > The brand new CFCE graphical environment could be mentioned here Maybe, but it is also a horrible acronym that new users probably won't recognize. > ./preparing/non-debian-partitioning.xml:If none of the above apply, > you'll need to partition your hard disk before > > Not sure whether this should be "applies" or "apply" "apply" is correct AFAIK.
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