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Re: second attempt to fix this issue



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Of course, this refers to the installation guide text.

Eddy Petrișor wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> I have complained a while back that this phrase is not that well formed :-)
> 
> I will try again, since is still not fixed, although I raised the flag in
> October last year.
> 
> Additions are marked like *this*. Removals are marked like (-this-)
> 
> 
> "It will guess the broadcast address is the bitwise OR of your system's
> IP address with the bitwise negation of the netmask."
> 
> IMHO it would be better to be:
> 
> "It will guess the broadcast address *which* is the bitwise OR of your system's
> IP address with the bitwise negation of the netmask."
> 
> Or:
> 
> "It will guess the broadcast address (-is-) *as* the bitwise OR of your system's
> IP address with the bitwise negation of the netmask."
> 

- --
Regards,
EddyP
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