Bug#405004: installation-guide

[Clytie Siddall <clytie@riverland.net.au>]

Package: installation-guide
Version:
Severity: wishlist
Tags: l10n, patch

While updating my translation of the installation-guide, I have  
encountered the following typos, which I thought you might like to  
fix before the next release.
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using-d-i.po
1.
.po:310
auto:	⑤	Tag: para
Original:	⌘0	The criteria for selecting a partition is that it is  
FAT format filesystem
with its <emphasis>boot</emphasis> flag set. &d-i; may show multiple  
choices
depending on what it finds from scanning all of the disks of the system
including EFI partitions of other system disks and EFI diagnostic
partitions. Remember, <command>elilo</command> may format the partition
during the installation, erasing any previous contents!

- The criteria for selecting a partition is that it is FAT format  
filesystem
+ The criterion for selecting a partition is that it must be a FAT  
format filesystem

(or "...is that it is a FAT...", but that's a bit awkward to read).


2.
po:366
auto:	⑤	Tag: para
Original:	⌘0	There are several methods you can use to get a shell  
while running an
installation. On most systems, and if you are not installing over serial
console, the easiest method is to switch to the second <emphasis>virtual
console</emphasis> by pressing <keycombo><keycap>Left Alt</keycap>
<keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo><footnote> <para> That is: press the
<keycap>Alt</keycap> key on the left-hand side of the <keycap>space  
bar</
keycap> and the <keycap>F2</keycap> function key at the same time. </ 
para> </
footnote> (on a Mac keyboard, <keycombo><keycap>Option</keycap>  
<keycap>F2</
keycap></keycombo>). Use <keycombo><keycap>Left Alt</keycap>  
<keycap>F1</
keycap></keycombo> to switch back to installer itself.

-  (on a Mac keyboard, <keycombo><keycap>Option</keycap> <keycap>F2</
keycap></keycombo>).
+  (on a Mac keyboard, <keycombo><keycap>option</keycap> <keycap>F2</
keycap></keycombo>: newer Macs also have "alt" printed on the  
<keycap>option</keycap> key).
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I hope this is useful. I've just finished updating all the  
installation-guide files for my language, so I won't be sending in  
any more of these these typo reports for a while. It's getting much  
harder to find mistakes. ;)

Clytie Siddall (vi-VN, Vietnamese free-software translation team /  
nhóm Việt hóa phần mềm tự do)

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