tags 367861 + pending thanks Hi Clytie, An old one, but that is what you get if you make them so long ;-) I've made changes based on most of your suggestions, but in some cases I prefer the original text. In quite a few cases I've done more of a rewrite than commit the changes your suggested. Some comments below. Thanks for the critical eye. Cheers, FJP On Thursday 18 May 2006 15:49, Clytie Siddall wrote: > + The benefit you gain depends on the type of MD device you are > creating. Hmm. Doesn't benefit already imply a gain? I've done: "What benefits this brings depends..." > These two strings: > auto: ⑤ Tag: title > Original: ⌘0 Installing the Base System > auto: ⑤ Tag: title > Original: ⌘0 Base System Installation > > have the same meaning in my language. What is the difference between > them in the Manual? I've removed one section level here. > Original: ⌘0 The EFI partition is a FAT filesystem format > partition on one of the hard disks of the system, usually the same > disk that contains the <emphasis>root</emphasis> filesystem. <snip> > Note that the <quote>EFI Boot Manager</quote> would find these files > using the path <filename>fs<replaceable>n</replaceable>:\\efi\\debian</ > filename>. <snip> > > What is the connotation of the <replaceable>n</replaceable>? Does the > user need to understand what this means? n probably is a number; users familiar with the IA-64 architecture will know what it means. I'm generally a lot less critical about technical terms and not explaining enough when it comes to non-x86 (and to a lesser extend powerpc) architectures. > - You then need to IPL GNU/Linux from the DASD > + You then need to boot GNU/LInux from the DASD > > (using IPL isn't really necessary and just adds more acronyms for the > poor reader to handle). The poor user that does not know what an IPL is, has no business installing an S/390 mainframe (even if it is the hercules emulator :-) I've kept IPL. > There is no string: > <guimenuitem>network-console: Continue installation remotely using > SSH</guimenuitem> > in the Level 1 Debian-Installer file, only the > <guimenuitem>Continue installation remotely using SSH</guimenuitem>. > string. No, but that is how it is shown when you select the module for installation during "install additional components": udeb name + package description. I don't think it will be translated either...
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