Bug#380093: Debian branding
On 28/07/06, Joey Hess <joeyh@debian.org> wrote:
Eddy Petrisor wrote:
> May I suggest removing "your" from your proposed text? It seems more
> professional to me.
At the moment, only the core of the system is installed. To tune the
system to your needs, you can choose to install one or more of the
following predefined collections of software.
I think I removed the first "your" already because it scanned better.
Indeed, this way seems better (actually, that exact "your" bothered
me, but I might have not been too clear on that). Also, note that in
some situations the installation is not done on a system owned by the
person doing the installation, so is more correct *not* to say "your
system" ;-) .
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Regards,
EddyP
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