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Bug#248067: it's correct in the manual source but I cannot find it in the build manual...



tag 248067 patch
thanks

On Sunday 09 July 2006 14:30, Frans Pop wrote:
> That is because shutdown.xml is not included in post-install.xml. Probably
> because the text was not considered finished or not sufficiently
> relevant.

Attached is a patch with updated information which I consider much more 
finished, maybe the wording about the desktop environments logout-menu can be 
improved, but besides that, I think that's it.

Otherwise I would suggest to remove this file from svn.


regards,
	Holger
Index: shutdown.xml
===================================================================
--- shutdown.xml	(Revision 38965)
+++ shutdown.xml	(Arbeitskopie)
@@ -3,23 +3,27 @@
 
 
  <sect1 id="shutdown">
- <title>Shutting Down the System</title>
+ <title>Shutting down the system</title>
 
 <para>
 
 To shut down a running Linux system, you must not reboot with the
 reset switch on the front or back of your computer, or just turn off
-the computer.  Linux must be shut down in a controlled manner,
-otherwise files may be lost and disk damage incurred. You can press
-the key combination <keycombo> <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
-<keycap>Alt</keycap> <keycap>Del</keycap> </keycombo>
+the computer.  Linux should be shut down in a controlled manner,
+otherwise files migh get lost and/or disk damage might occur. If you run a 
+desktop environment, usually there is an option for <quote>shutdown</quote> 
+in the <quote>logout-menu</quote>.
+
+</para><para>
+
+Alternativly you can press the key combination <keycombo> 
+<keycap>Ctrl</keycap> <keycap>Alt</keycap> <keycap>Del</keycap> </keycombo>
 <phrase arch="powerpc;m68k"> or <keycombo> <keycap>Control</keycap>
 <keycap>Shift</keycap> <keycap>Power</keycap> </keycombo> on Macintosh
-systems</phrase>. You may also log in as
-root and type <userinput>shutdown -h now</userinput>,
-<userinput>reboot</userinput>, or <userinput>halt</userinput> if
-either of the key combinations do not work or you prefer to type
-commands.
+systems</phrase>. Or you may also log in as root and type 
+<command>poweroff</command>, <command>reboot</command>, <command>halt</command>
+<command>shutdown -h now</command> if either of the key combinations do not 
+work or you prefer to type commands.
 
 </para>
  </sect1>

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