Bug#367861: installation-guide using-d-i
Package: installation-guide
Version:
Severity: minor
Tags: l10n, patch
Typos etc. from the file using-d-i.po
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using d-i typos etc.
1.
po:78
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 During a low memory install, not all components will be
available. One of the limitations is that you won't be able to choose
a language for the installation.
- One of the limitations is
+ One of the other limitations is
(since not having access to all the components is already a limitation).
2.
po:127
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 If you select a pristine disk which doesn't have
neither partitions nor free space on it, you will be offered to
create a new partition table (this is needed so you can create new
partitions). After this a new line entitled <quote>FREE SPACE</quote>
should appear under the selected disk.
- doesn't have neither partitions nor free space on it,
+ has neither partitions nor free space on it,
- you will be offered to
+ you will have the opportunity to
- After this a new line
+ After this, a new line
- should appear under the selected disk.
+ should appear in the table under the selected disk.
3.
po:128
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 If you select some free space, you will be offered to
create new partition. You will have to answer a quick series of
questions about its size, type (primary or logical), and location
(beginning or end of the free space). After this, you will be
presented with detailed overview of your new partition. There are
options like mountpoint, mount options, bootable flag, or way of
usage. If you don't like the preselected defaults, feel free to
change them to your liking. E.g. by selecting the option
<guimenuitem>Use as:</guimenuitem>, you can choose different
filesystem for this partition including the possibility to use the
partition for swap, software RAID, LVM, or not use it at all. Other
nice feature is the possibility to copy data from existing partition
onto this one. When you are satisfied with your new partition, select
<guimenuitem>Done setting up the partition</guimenuitem> and you will
be thrown back to the <command>partman</command>'s main screen.
- you will be offered to create new partition.
+ you will have the opportunity to create a new partition.
OR
+ the program will offer to create a new partition.
- with detailed overview
+ with a detailed overview
- There are options like mountpoint, mount options, bootable flag, or
way of usage.
+ The options include choosing the mountpoint, configuring the mount
action itself, (un)setting the bootable flag, and deciding how the
partition will be used.
- choose different filesystem for this partition including the
possibility to use the partition for swap, software RAID, LVM, or not
use it at all.
+ choose a different filesystem for this partition, including the
capacity to use the partition for swap, software RAID or LVM, or not
to use it at all.
- Other nice feature is the possibility to copy data from existing
partition onto this one.
+ Another nice feature is the ability to copy data from an existing
partition onto this one.
- and you will be thrown back
+ and you will return
4.
If you decide you want to change something about your partition,
simply select the partition, which will bring you to the partition
configuration menu. Because this is the same screen like when
creating a new partition, you can change the same set of options. One
thing which might not be very obvious at a first glance is that you
can resize the partition by selecting the item displaying the size of
the partition. Filesystems known to work are at least fat16, fat32,
ext2, ext3 and swap. This menu also allows you to delete a partition.
- Because this is the same screen like when creating a new partition,
you can change the same set of options.
+ This is the same screen you see when creating a new partition, so
you can modify the same options.
5.
The benefit you gain depends on a type of a MD device you are
creating. Currently supported are: <variablelist> <varlistentry>
<term>RAID0</term><listitem><para> Is mainly aimed at performance.
RAID0 splits all incoming data into <firstterm>stripes</firstterm>
and distributes them equally over each disk in the array. This can
increase the speed of read/write operations, but when one of the
disks fails, you will loose <emphasis>everything</emphasis> (part of
the information is still on the healthy disk(s), the other part
<emphasis>was</emphasis> on the failed disk). </para><para> The
typical use for RAID0 is a partition for video editing. </para></
listitem> </varlistentry> <varlistentry> <term>RAID1</
term><listitem><para> Is suitable for setups where reliability is the
first concern. It consists of several (usually two) equally sized
partitions where every partition contains exactly the same data. This
essentially means three things. First, if one of your disks fails,
you still have the data mirrored on the remaining disks. Second, you
can use only a fraction of the available capacity (more precisely, it
is the size of the smallest partition in the RAID). Third, file reads
are load balanced among the disks, which can improve performance on a
server, such as a file server, that tends to be loaded with more disk
reads than writes. </para><para> Optionally you can have a spare disk
in the array which will take the place of the failed disk in the case
of failure. </para></listitem> </varlistentry> <varlistentry>
<term>RAID5</term><listitem><para> Is a good compromise between
speed, reliability and data redundancy. RAID5 splits all incomming
data into stripes and distributes them equally on all but one disks
(similar to RAID0). Unlike RAID0, RAID5 also computes
<firstterm>parity</firstterm> information, which gets written on the
remaining disk. The parity disk is not static (that would be called
RAID4), but is changing periodically, so the parity information is
distributed equally on all disks. When one of the disks fails, the
missing part of information can be computed from remaining data and
its parity. RAID5 must consist of at least three active partitions.
Optionally you can have a spare disk in the array which will take the
place of the failed disk in the case of failure. </para><para> As you
can see, RAID5 has similar degree of reliability like RAID1 while
achieving less redundancy. On the other hand it might be a bit slower
on write operation than RAID0 due to computation of parity
information. </para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> To
sum it up:
- The benefit you gain depends on a type of a MD device you are
creating.
+ The benefit you gain depends on the type of MD device you are
creating.
- RAID0 splits all incoming data into <firstterm>stripes</firstterm>
- RAID5 splits all incomming data into stripes
Isn't the correct term "slices", not "stripes"? Stripes are only two-
dimensional.
- you will loose
+ you will lose
- equally sized partitions
+ equally-sized partitions
- Third, file reads are load balanced among the disks
+ Third, file-reads are load-balanced among the disks
- incomming
+ incoming
- on all but one disks
+ on all but one disk
- RAID5 has similar degree of reliability like RAID1
+ RAID5 has a similar degree of reliability to RAID1
- On the other hand it might be a bit slower on write operation than
RAID0 due to computation of parity information.
+ On the other hand, it might be a bit slower on write operations
than RAID0, due to the computation of parity information.
6.
po:160
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 If you want to know the whole truth about Software
RAID, have a look at <ulink url=\"&url-software-raid-howto;
\">Software RAID HOWTO</ulink>.
- If you want to know the whole truth about Software RAID
+ If you want to know more about Software RAID
(it's an amusing structure, but misleading, and could be
misinterpreted as a didactic statement).
7.
po:170
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 After partitioning the installer asks a few more
questions that will be used to set up the system it is about to install.
- After partitioning the installer
+ After partitioning, the installer
8.
These two strings:
po:187
auto: ⑤ Tag: title
Original: ⌘0 Installing the Base System
po:189
auto: ⑤ Tag: title
Original: ⌘0 Base System Installation
have the same meaning in my language. What is the difference between
them in the Manual?
9.
po:194
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 After the base system is installed, you have a usable
but limited system. Most users will want to add additional software
to the system to tune it to their needs, and the installer lets you
do so. This step can take even longer than installing the base system
if you have a slow computer or network.
- add additional software
+ add more software
("add" and "additional" are too similar to be used in the same phrase).
10.
The main means that people use to install packages on their system is
via a program called <command>apt-get</command>, from the
<classname>apt</classname> package.<footnote> <para> Note that the
actual program that installs packages is called <command>dpkg</
command>. However, this program is more of a low-level tool.
<command>apt-get</command> is a higher-level tool as it will invoke
<command>dpkg</command> as appropriate and also because it knows to
install other packages which are required for the package you're
trying to install, as well as how to retrieve the package from your
CD, the network, or wherever. </para> </footnote> Other front-ends
for package management, like <command>aptitude</command> and
<command>synaptic</command> are also in use and depend on
<command>apt-get</command>. These front-ends are recommended for new
users, since they integrate some additional features (package
searching and status checks) in a nice user interface.
- The main means that people use to install packages on their system
is via a program called <command>apt-get</command>,
+ Most people install packages on their system via a program called
<command>apt-get</command>,
- Note that the actual program that installs packages is called
<command>dpkg</command>.
+ Note that the program which actually installs the packages is
called <command>dpkg</command>.
- <command>apt-get</command> is a higher-level tool as it will invoke
<command>dpkg</command> as appropriate and also because it knows to
install other packages which are required for the package you're
trying to install, as well as how to retrieve the package from your
CD, the network, or wherever.
+ <command>apt-get</command> is a higher-level tool, which will
invoke <command>dpkg</command> as appropriate, and knows which other
packages should be installed to support the one you're trying to
install, as well as how to retrieve the package (from your CD, the
network etc.).
- Other front-ends for package management, like <command>aptitude</
command> and <command>synaptic</command> are also in use and depend
on <command>apt-get</command>.
+ Other front-ends for package management, like <command>aptitude</
command> and <command>synaptic</command>, are also in use and depend
on <command>apt-get</command>.
11.
po:201
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 Once you've selected your tasks, select <guibutton>Ok</
guibutton>. At this point, <command>aptitude</command> will install
the packages you've selected.
- Ok
+ OK
12.
po:212
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 In this scenario is your outgoing mail forwarded to
another machine, called a <quote>smarthost</quote>, which does the
actual job for you. Smarthost also usually stores incoming mail
addressed to your computer, so you don't need to be permanently
online. That also means you have to download your mail from the
smarthost via programs like fetchmail. This option is suitable for
dial-up users.
- In this scenario is your outgoing mail forwarded to another
machine, called a <quote>smarthost</quote>, which does the actual job
for you.
+ In this scenario, your outgoing mail is forwarded to another
machine, called a <quote>smarthost</quote>, which does the actual job
for you.
- Smarthost also
+ A smarthost also
13.
po:219
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 If you are installing a diskless workstation,
obviously, booting off the local disk isn't a meaningful option, and
this step will be skipped. <phrase arch=\"sparc\">You may wish to set
the OpenBoot to boot from the network by default; see <xref linkend=
\"boot-dev-select-sun\"/>.</phrase>
- set the OpenBoot
+ set OpenBoot
14.
These two strings are very símilar:
po:220
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 Note that multiple operating systems booting on a
single machine is still something of a black art. This document does
not even attempt to document the various boot managers, which vary by
architecture and even by subarchitecture. You should see your boot
manager's documentation for more information.
po:223
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 Note that multiple operating systems booting on a
single machine is still something of a black art. The automatic
support for detecting and setting up boot loaders to boot other
operating systems varies by architecture and even by subarchitecture.
If it does not work you should consult your boot manager's
documentation for more information.
I am concerned that they don't show architecture-specific tags, so
may be a repetition..?
15.
po:225
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 If you have booted from SRM, if you select this option,
the installer will write <command>aboot</command> to the first sector
of the disk on which you installed Debian. <snip>
- If you have booted from SRM, if you select this option, the
installer will write
+ If you have booted from SRM, and you select this option, the
installer will write
16.
po:236
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 &d-i; presents you three choices where to install the
<command>LILO</command> boot loader:
- &d-i; presents you three choices where to install
+ &d-i; gives you three choices on where to install
17.
.po:245
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 The &architecture; boot loader is called <quote>elilo</
quote>. <snip> The <filename>/usr/sbin/elilo</filename> command
manages the partition and copies file into it. The
<filename>elilo.efi</filename> program is copied into the EFI
partition and then run by the <quote>EFI Boot Manager</quote> to
actually do the work of loading and starting the Linux kernel.
- and copies file into it.
+ and copies files into it.
OR
+ and copies the file into it.
- to actually do the work
+ to do the actual work
OR
+ actually to do the work
18.
po:248
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 The criteria for selecting a partition is that it is
FAT format filesystem with its <emphasis>boot</emphasis> flag set. &d-
i; may show multiple choices depending on what it finds from scanning
all of the disks of the system including EFI partitions of other
system disks and EFI diagnostic partitions. Remember, the
<command>elilo</command> may format the partition during the
installation, erasing any previous contents!
- the <command>elilo</command>
+ <command>elilo</command>
OR
+ the <command>elilo</command> bootloader
19.
.po:250
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 The EFI partition is a FAT filesystem format partition
on one of the hard disks of the system, usually the same disk that
contains the <emphasis>root</emphasis> filesystem. <snip> Note that
the <quote>EFI Boot Manager</quote> would find these files using the
path <filename>fs<replaceable>n</replaceable>:\\efi\\debian</
filename>. <snip>
What is the connotation of the <replaceable>n</replaceable>? Does the
user need to understand what this means?
20.
.po:277
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 is the number of the partition on which <filename>/etc/
delo.conf</filename> resides
Before this string, the string showing the name of the replaceable
term is missing.
21.
po:297
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 Select the <guimenuitem>Finish the installation</
guimenuitem> menu item which will halt the system because rebooting
is not supported on &arch-title; in this case. You then need to IPL
GNU/Linux from the DASD which you selected for the root filesystem
during the first steps of the installation.
- You then need to IPL GNU/Linux from the DASD
+ You then need to boot GNU/LInux from the DASD
(using IPL isn't really necessary and just adds more acronyms for the
poor reader to handle).
22.
po:304
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 There is an <guimenuitem>Execute a Shell</guimenuitem>
item on the menu. If the menu is not available when you need to use
the shell, press <keycombo><keycap>Left Alt</keycap> <keycap>F2</
keycap></keycombo> (on a Mac keyboard, <keycombo><keycap>Option</
keycap> <keycap>F2</keycap> </keycombo>) to switch to the second
<emphasis>virtual console</emphasis>. That's the <keycap>Alt</keycap>
key on the left-hand side of the <keycap>space bar</keycap>, and the
<keycap>F2</keycap> function key, at the same time. This is a
separate window running a Bourne shell clone called <command>ash</
command>.
- This is a separate window running a Bourne shell clone
+ The <guimenuitem>Execute a Shell</guimenuitem> command opens a
separate window running a Bourne shell clone
(because all the information about the keyboard shortcut comes before
"This is a separate window...", implying the last sentence is talking
about the keyboard shortcuts).
23.
po:309
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 This component is not loaded into the main installation
menu by default, so you have to explicitly ask for it. If you are
installing from CD, you need to boot with medium priority or
otherwise invoke the main installation menu and choose
<guimenuitem>Load installer components from CD</guimenuitem> and from
the list of additional components select <guimenuitem>network-
console: Continue installation remotely using SSH</guimenuitem>.
Successful load is indicated by a new menu entry called
<guimenuitem>Continue installation remotely using SSH</guimenuitem>.
There is no string:
<guimenuitem>network-console: Continue installation remotely using
SSH</guimenuitem>
in the Level 1 Debian-Installer file, only the
<guimenuitem>Continue installation remotely using SSH</guimenuitem>.
string.
#. Type: text
#. Description
#: ../network-console.templates:5
msgid "Continue installation remotely using SSH"
Where is the network-console string?
There is a string:
#. Type: select
#. Description
#: ../network-console.templates:14
msgid "Network console option:"
so should the Manual string read:
- and from the list of additional components select
<guimenuitem>network-console: Continue installation remotely using
SSH</guimenuitem>.
+ and from the list of additional components select
<guimenuitem>Network console option: Continue installation remotely
using SSH</guimenuitem>.
?
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I hope these are useful. :)
Clytie Siddall (vi-VN, Vietnamese free-software translation team /
nhóm Việt hóa phần mềm tự do)
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