On Sat, Jul 09, 2005 at 07:07:47AM +0200, Christian Perrier wrote:
> Quoting Debian Bug Tracking System (owner@bugs.debian.org):
> > Your message dated Fri, 08 Jul 2005 09:33:41 -0400
> > with message-id <E1Dqsz7-0004M1-00@newraff.debian.org>
> > and subject line Bug#265900: fixed in lilo-installer 1.11
> > has caused the attached Bug report to be marked as done.
>
>
> > * Patch from Eugeniy Meshcheryako to add raid-extra-boot=mbr-only
> > to lilo.conf for software raid (Closes: #281724) and to add a new, working
> > menu for raid (Closes: #265900)
>
>
> This patch introduces a new string which I'm not completely
> comfortable with:
>
> The LILO program needs to be installed to make your new Debian system
> bootable. You may choose to install it onto software RAID array or onto
> other device.
>
> The first sentence is common with other lilo-installer templates and I
> propose to remove the "Debian" word here to avoid needed branding to
> derived distributions ("make your new system bootable" seems pretty
> acceptable to me).
>
> The second sentence is probably missing an article : onto *a* software
> RAID array. We can also probably avoid the repetition of "onto".
>
> Native speakers?
only a Subject retitle from a native Dutch speaker,
to trigger native english speaker :P
GSt
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