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patch on tftp/rarp.xml



Hello Debian Install System Team,


Attached you will a patch that boils down to

- ethernet address of client (aka MAC address)
+ ethernet address (aka MAC address) of client


- client
+ client computers to be installed


- server systems
+ a RARP server system

where the last two are about 1 single server and many clientsss


Could someone applied into the versioning system?
As log message I have this in mind:

ethernet and MAC address together
emphasing the difference in server and clientsss



Cheers
Geert Stappers
-- 

P.S.

I still did not find out why I get: 

svn co svn+ssh://stappers-guest@svn.debian.org/svn/d-i/trunk debian-installer
stappers-guest@svn.debian.org's password:
svn: Connection closed unexpectedly

Hints are welcome
Index: installer/doc/manual/en/install-methods/tftp/rarp.xml
===================================================================
--- installer/doc/manual/en/install-methods/tftp/rarp.xml	(revision 15610)
+++ installer/doc/manual/en/install-methods/tftp/rarp.xml	(working copy)
@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@
    <title>Setting up RARP server</title>
 <para>
 
-To setup RARP, you need to know the Ethernet address of the client
-(a.k.a. the MAC address).  If you don't know this information, you can
+To setup RARP, you need to know the Ethernet address (a.k.a. the MAC address)
+of the client computers to be installed.
+If you don't know this information, you can
 
 <phrase arch="sparc"> pick it off the initial OpenPROM boot messages, use the
 OpenBoot <userinput>.enet-addr</userinput> command, or </phrase>
@@ -17,8 +18,9 @@
 
 </para><para>
 
-On systems using a Linux 2.2.x kernel, you need to populate the kernel's 
-RARP table. To do this, run the following commands:
+On a RARP server system using a Linux 2.2.x kernel,
+you need to populate the kernel's RARP table.
+To do this, run the following commands:
 
 <informalexample>
 <para>
@@ -51,7 +53,8 @@
 
 </para><para>
 
-On systems using a Linux 2.4.x kernel, there is no RARP module, and
+On a RARP server system using a Linux 2.4.x kernel,
+there is no RARP module, and
 you should instead use the <command>rarpd</command> program.  The
 procedure is similar to that used under SunOS in the following
 paragraph.

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