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English string in partman-target



Hi,
I'm not sure about the correctness of the following string in 
partman-target:
"Partitioning a hard drive consists of logically dividing it to create 
the space needed to install your new Debian system.  You need to 
choose which partition(s) will be used for the installation of 
Debian."

I'm talking about the use of "consists of", shouldn't it be something 
like:
"Partitioning a hard drive implies logically dividing it ..."

or 

"Partitioning a hard drive means logically dividing it..."

or even

"Partitioning a hard drive is the process of dividing it logically to 
create..."

I am not a native english speaker, but somehow the use of "consists 
of" does not really feel proper here...

Anyway, just a thought...

Konstantinos



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