Bug#220030: prebaseconfig: Debconf templates polishing
Package: prebaseconfig
Severity: normal
Well, this one is maybe more important than others....At least, ALL users of
d-i will see it....
So, please, native English speakers, check my suggestions...
Detailed rationale:
Template: prebaseconfig/reboot_in_progress
Type: note
-_Description: The machine will now reboot.
- When you reboot the system, you'll need to make sure you are booting
+_Description: System reboot
+ The system will now reboot.
+ .
+ Before this reboot occurs, you'll need to make sure you are booting
from the right media.
.
- If you are booting from the local disk, make sure there are no
+ If you are booting from the local disk, check that there are no
floppies in the floppy drives and no CD-ROM in the tray. If you made
- a custom boot floppy and want to boot from that, you should put that
- floppy in the first floppy drive. Finally, you can restart the
- installation system by booting from your install media.
+ a custom boot floppy and want to boot from it, you should put that
+ floppy in the first floppy drive.
+ .
+ You may also restart the installation system by booting from your
+ installation media.
.
Please take care of all that before you continue.
1) Make this look more like a title
2) ....thus add "The system will now reboot" as a separated paragraph.
"system" seems better than "machine" to me...
3) Before this reboot occurs is maybe not the best possible. English
speakers needed..:-)
4) s/make sure/check that : look sbetter to me but your mileage may vary
5) boot from it or boot from that?
I add a paragraph as the suggestion for rebooting from the install(ation)
media is another idea and should appear more easily, imho
-- System Information:
Debian Release: testing/unstable
Architecture: i386
Kernel: Linux mykerinos 2.4.22 #2 Mon Sep 29 15:12:10 CEST 2003 i686
Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (ignored: LC_ALL set to fr_FR.UTF-8)
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