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Bug#142868: [patch] Install documentation patch



Package: boot-floppies
Version: 3.0.23
Severity: normal

Attached is a patch to the CVS version.

URL update for &url-x86-laptop;
tty2, mention how-to
use of <enumlist>        (match progeny users guide)
use of <p> in <enumlist> (match progeny users guide)

-- 
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+  Osamu Aoki <debian@aokiconsulting.com> @ Cupertino, CA USA         +

diff -ru boot-floppies-org/documentation/en/partitioning.sgml boot-floppies/documentation/en/partitioning.sgml
--- boot-floppies-org/documentation/en/partitioning.sgml	Sat Apr 13 18:19:38 2002
+++ boot-floppies/documentation/en/partitioning.sgml	Sun Apr 14 08:20:07 2002
@@ -502,7 +502,8 @@
     <p>
 One of these programs will be run by default when you select
 &MSG-PARTITION-DISK;.  If the one which is run by default isn't the
-one you want, quit the partitioner, go to the shell (tty2), and
+one you want, quit the partitioner, go to the shell (<tt>tty2</tt>) 
+by pressing <tt>Alt</tt> and <tt>F2</tt> keys together, and
 manually type in the name of the program you want to use (and
 arguments, if any).  Then skip the &MSG-PARTITION-DISK; step in
 <prgn>dbootstrap</prgn> and continue to the next step.
@@ -743,7 +744,8 @@
     <p>
 In some special situations, <prgn>dbootstrap</prgn> might not know how
 to mount your filesystems (whether root or otherwise).  It may be
-possible, if you're an experienced Linux user, to simply go to tty2
+possible, if you're an experienced Linux user, to simply go to <tt>tty2</tt>
+by pressing <tt>Alt</tt> and <tt>F2</tt> keys together,
 and manually run the commands you need to run in order to mount the
 partition in question.
     <p>
diff -ru boot-floppies-org/documentation/en/preparing.sgml boot-floppies/documentation/en/preparing.sgml
--- boot-floppies-org/documentation/en/preparing.sgml	Sat Apr 13 15:33:41 2002
+++ boot-floppies/documentation/en/preparing.sgml	Sun Apr 14 08:10:31 2002
@@ -1073,45 +1073,45 @@
 
      <sect2 id="ctbooi">Changing the Boot Order on IDE Computers
 <p>
-<list>
-<item> 1 As your computer starts, press the keys to enter the bios 
+<enumlist>
+<item>As your computer starts, press the keys to enter the bios 
     utility. Often, it is the Delete key. However, consult the
     hardware documentation for the exact keystrokes.
-<item> 2 Find the boot sequence in the setup utility. Its location
+<item>Find the boot sequence in the setup utility. Its location
     depends on your bios , but you are looking for a field that lists
     drives.
-   
+<p>   
     Common entries on ide machines are C, A, cdrom or A, C, cdrom .
-   
+<p>   
     C is the hard drive, and A is the floppy drive.
    
-<item> 3 Change the boot sequence setting so that the cdrom or the
+<item>Change the boot sequence setting so that the cdrom or the
     floppy is first. Usually, the Page Up or Page Down keys cycle
     through the possible choices.
-<item> 4 Save your changes. Instructions on the screen tell you how to
+<item>Save your changes. Instructions on the screen tell you how to
     save the changes on your computer.
-</list>
+</enumlist>
 
      <sect2 id="ctboos">Changing the Boot Order on SCSI Computers
 <p>
-<list>
-<item> 1 As your computer starts, press the keys to enter the scsi setup
+<enumlist>
+<item>As your computer starts, press the keys to enter the scsi setup
     utility.
-   
+<p>   
     You can start the scsi setup utility after the memory check and
     the message about how to start the bios utility displays when you
     start your computer.
-   
+<p>   
     The keystrokes you need depend on the utility. Often, it is
     Ctrl-F2. However, consult your hardware documentation for the
     exact keystrokes.
    
-<item> 2 Find the utility for changing the boot order.
-<item> 3 Set the utility so that the scsi id of the cd drive is first on
+<item>Find the utility for changing the boot order.
+<item>Set the utility so that the scsi id of the cd drive is first on
     the list.
-<item> 4 Save your changes. Instructions on the screen tell you how to
+<item>Save your changes. Instructions on the screen tell you how to
     save the changes on your computer. Often, you must press F10.
-</list>
+</enumlist>
 
     <sect2 id="cd-settings">CD-ROM Settings
       <p>
diff -ru boot-floppies-org/documentation/en/tech-info.sgml boot-floppies/documentation/en/tech-info.sgml
--- boot-floppies-org/documentation/en/tech-info.sgml	Tue Mar 19 19:45:13 2002
+++ boot-floppies/documentation/en/tech-info.sgml	Sun Apr 14 08:20:58 2002
@@ -81,7 +81,9 @@
 hard drive. This is why having one driver disk is nice.
 
 <p>If you are using a disk set featuring a flavored kernel, you will
-need to switch to <tt>tty2</tt> and hit &enterkey; to get a prompt.
+need to switch to <tt>tty2</tt> 
+by pressing <tt>Alt</tt> and <tt>F2</tt> keys together,
+and hit &enterkey; to get a prompt.
 Type <tt>ls /target/lib/modules</tt> to see where the driver disk put
 your modules. Then <tt>uname -r</tt> to find out where the modules
 should be. You'll then want to do something suitable like the
diff -ru boot-floppies-org/documentation/urls.ent boot-floppies/documentation/urls.ent
--- boot-floppies-org/documentation/urls.ent	Tue Apr  9 07:04:11 2002
+++ boot-floppies/documentation/urls.ent	Sun Apr 14 07:59:23 2002
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@
   "&url-jf;JFdocs/PCMCIA-HOWTO.html"> ]]>
 <!entity url-pcmcia-howto "&url-ldp;HOWTO/PCMCIA-HOWTO.html">
 
-<!entity url-x86-laptop	"http://www.cs.utexas.edu/users/kharker/linux-laptop/";>
+<!entity url-x86-laptop	"http://www.linux-laptop.net/";>
 
 <!-- this link is bad and not sure how to replace it! -->
 <!entity url-linux-mca "http://www.dgmicro.com/mca/general-goods.html";>

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