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Bug#67421: marked as done ([doc] bugs during install)

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From: Manuel Segura <manuel.segura@escpi.cnam.fr>
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Package: boot-floppies
Version: kernel 2.2.15, potato test cylce 2 i386
Architecture: i386
model: PII 233MHz, chipset 440BX
RAM: 128MB
SCSI: Adaptec Ultra 160
Network card:

In CD1 "Debian GNU/Linux 2.2 "Potato" - test-cycle-2 i386"
french doc: "Installer Debian Linux 2.2 sur Intel x86" version 2.2.15, 06

I have found some mistakes:
- Page 10, Chapter 2.5.3, the line containing the ftp url does not fit in=
page and is
- Page 24, Chapter 5.3 the line containing the http url
does not fit in the page and is truncated
- Page 26, Chapter 5.3 the line describing fdisk.txt and cfdisk.txt does =
not fit

in the page.
- Page 32, chapter 6.1 the end of the line speaking about IBP PS/1 does n=
fit in the page: "hd=3Dcylindres,t=EAtes,secteurs."
- Page 34, chapter 6.6 the line containing the email address
does not fit in the page.
- Page 34, chapter 6.6 some lines when describing a bug report does not f=
it in
the page:
the line that contains "scsi: nom de votre controleur..."
the line that contains "cd-rom: mod=E8le de votre cdrom ..."
the line that contains "carte r=E9seau: ..."
- Page 42, chapter 7.16: "Le moment de v=E9rit=E9":
.In case of installing from a CDROM, you must say to the user to eject th=
floppy and
the cdrom
.you must say something about MD5 menu
.you must say something about Shadow passwords menu: the chapter 7.19 is
in the document, because Debian installer asked to me about shadow passwo=
asking for a root password.
- Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text: replace
"Ensuite, vous allez arriv=E9" by "Ensuite, vous allez arriver"
- Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text: replace
"souvenez de passer l'=E9tape" by "souvenez vous de passer l'=E9tape"
- Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text, in the
line containing "Sinon, vous pouvez quitter dselect et reprendre plus tar=
d" on
word "tard"
and in the next sentence: "une fois que vous aurez r=E9cup=E9r=E9 les paq=
uets Debian
votre syst=E8me" in the word "sur"
- Page 45, chapter 7.23, a little mistake in the french text: replace
"diificult=E9" by "difficult=E9"
- Page 45, chapter 7.23, le line speaking  on "/etc/chatscripts" does not=
 fit in
the page.
- The chapter 7.23 on PPP is misplaced: I have been asked on PPP configur=
after PCMCIA (chapter 7.20)
- A chapter about "Apt configuration" should be written, after the new PP=
The chapters order should be: PCMCIA,PPP,Apt configuration

- A big problem: During install, I have never seen a menu for choosing

Thank you for your good work

Manuel Segura
Responsable Informatique de l'ESCPI

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The referenced report, regarding problems with the potato install
manual, was addressed in the current (woody) version, except for
the problem of overflowing links, which is being addressed separately
in debiandoc-sgml.

Please file a new report for any remaining problems with the woody
manual. Your input is appreciated.

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