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Re: Unclear doc and a typo

Marcin Owsiany <porridge@pandora.info.bielsko.pl> writes:

> I'm updating the documentation translation, and came across the
> following paragraph:
>      If you are installing from an official CD-ROM, the
>      software should do the right thing automatically, not even
>      prompting you for a device to install from (unless you
>      boot with the <tt>verbose</tt> argument).  When prompted
>      for the CD-ROM, be sure to enter the first one.
>                                 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> What do you mean by "entering the first one"? It might be a
> silly question, but I haven't done an installation for a few
> months...

I mean, enter CD-ROM #1.

I changed the wording to:

  When prompted for the CD-ROM, be sure to insert the first CD-ROM in
  the drive.

> Also, there seems to be a typo in the "mount-other" section:
> Some some specialized uses, <prgn>dbootstrap</prgn> might not...
> ^^^^^^^^^
> I would correct it, but I'm not sure if that should have been
> "For some" or "In some" :-\

Yes, that's awkward.  I've changed that to:

  In some special situations,

Thanks for pointing this out.  Committing now.

.....Adam Di Carlo....adam@onShore.com.....<URL:http://www.onShore.com/>

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