Re: Unclear doc and a typo
Marcin Owsiany <porridge@pandora.info.bielsko.pl> writes:
> I'm updating the documentation translation, and came across the
> following paragraph:
>
> If you are installing from an official CD-ROM, the
> software should do the right thing automatically, not even
> prompting you for a device to install from (unless you
> boot with the <tt>verbose</tt> argument). When prompted
> for the CD-ROM, be sure to enter the first one.
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> What do you mean by "entering the first one"? It might be a
> silly question, but I haven't done an installation for a few
> months...
I mean, enter CD-ROM #1.
I changed the wording to:
When prompted for the CD-ROM, be sure to insert the first CD-ROM in
the drive.
> Also, there seems to be a typo in the "mount-other" section:
>
> Some some specialized uses, <prgn>dbootstrap</prgn> might not...
> ^^^^^^^^^
>
> I would correct it, but I'm not sure if that should have been
> "For some" or "In some" :-\
Yes, that's awkward. I've changed that to:
In some special situations,
Thanks for pointing this out. Committing now.
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.....Adam Di Carlo....adam@onShore.com.....<URL:http://www.onShore.com/>
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