Amiga-install doc diff
Hey! I like this doc better than the mac one. Far fewer errors...
Russell
--- debian-amiga.txt Thu Jul 6 09:55:18 2000
+++ debian-amiga1.txt Thu Jul 6 10:29:04 2000
@@ -207,12 +207,12 @@
on m68k platforms, and I'll tell you what you have to do at each step
now.
- Release notes
- This is just a screen with a few informations about Debian's goals,
+ This is just a screen with some information about Debian's goals,
who built the rescue set etc.
Now we come to the main installation screen which lists all possible
- actions you can take, with the next logical step always being highlit
- at the top of the list. I recommend to strictly follow the suggested
+ actions you can take, with the next logical step always being
highlighted
+ at the top of the list. I recommend you strictly follow the suggested
way.
- Configure the keyboard
@@ -231,17 +231,16 @@
- Initialize and Activate a Swap Partition
When pressing <Return>, you will see a list of partitions that the
- installation program has found as being prepared by you for usage
- as a swap partition. Probably there is only one choice, and it should
- have the same name you wrote down under AmigaOS while you were in
- HDToolbox.
+ installation program has found for usage as a swap partition.
+ Probably there is only one choice, and it should have the same name
+ you wrote down under AmigaOS while you were in HDToolbox.
If you have chosen to use several swap partitions, repeat the
following
step for all of them:
* Press <Return> to accept the selected partition
* When asked whether you want to do a bad-block scan, you can safely
skip this step, so select "No" here using <Tab>.
* When asked whether you really want to initialize this partition as
- a swap partition, think twice, then, when being sure, press
<Return>.
+ a swap partition, think twice, then, when you're sure, press
<Return>.
At this point the swap partition will be "formatted" which only takes
a second (you'll hardly be able to read the text that appears at the
top
of the screen - ignore that for now).
@@ -260,7 +259,7 @@
be mounted somewhere under this mount point afterwards.
- Install Operating System Kernel and Modules
- Select the medium, on which you have the installation files, i.e.
CDROM,
+ Select the medium on which you have the installation files, i.e.
CDROM,
if you are installing with the official CD-ROM, or the harddisk
partition on which you copied the amiga subdirectory (or unpacked the
"amigainstall.tgz" archive).
@@ -275,7 +274,7 @@
- Configure Device Driver Modules
This step is only necessary if certain device drivers need to be
loaded
- very early when Linux starts up later; like, an Ethernet driver has
+ very early when Linux starts up; for instance, an Ethernet driver has
to be pre-loaded so that the networking can already be initialized
at boot-time. For a stand-alone system you don't have to configure
anything here, but you should still select this item so that the
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