Re: sponsor brochure revision

[Ana Carolina Comandulli <caroll@funlabs.org>]

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On 30-08-2014 16:12, martin f krafft wrote:
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>> I started reading the sponsorship brochure and have a couple of 
>> suggestions.
> I have incorporated both your suggestions, thanks!

Thank you!

> You should join the debconf-data group on alioth… 
> https://alioth.debian.org/projects/debconf-data/

Oh, thank you. I just asked to join the group.

> This is great. Thank you for reaching out!

I hope to be able to do more. ;)


While I can't do the changes myself, I have some more suggestions.

Sorry I read again and found a couple, and ended up using the spelling
tool.

- - line 567: change unforgetable for unforgettable;
- - line 575: change adequatly for adequately;
- - line 582: change sight-seeing for sightseeing (source:
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/sightseeing)
- - line 732: change attendess for attendees;
- - line 743, 744, 745: change licenced for licensed;


Cheers!



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Ana Carolina Comandulli <caroll@funlabs.org>
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