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Bug#781058: marked as done (www.debian.org: Update HP info in partners/index.wml page)

Your message dated Tue, 28 Apr 2015 18:48:13 +0000
with message-id <E1YnAYH-0005IU-V2@moszumanska.debian.org>
and subject line Debian WWW CVS commit by larjona-guest fixes #781058
has caused the Debian Bug report #781058,
regarding www.debian.org: Update HP info in partners/index.wml page
to be marked as done.

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781058: http://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=781058
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--- Begin Message --- 
Package: www.debian.org
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Hi everybody
I'm attaching a patch with the new paragraph about HP.
The wording has passed review in -publicity and -debconf because of the
publication of a blog post about HP sponsoring DebConf15 at a platinum level.
Martin Michlmayr gave us some feedback too.

My plan is, if there are no objections, to update the website soon after the
blog post is published.



-- System Information:
Debian Release: 8.0
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 3.16.0-4-686-pae (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=es_ES.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=es_ES.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Init: systemd (via /run/systemd/system)

--- /home/larjona/Documentos/l10n/Debian/webwml/english/partners/index.wml
+++ /home/larjona/Documentos/l10n/Debian/webwml/english/partners/index.new.wml
@@ -28,16 +28,16 @@
   <div>
     <partnerlogo "Hewlett-Packard" hp.gif "http://www.hp.com/";>
     <partnerdesc>
-      <p><a href="http://www.hp.com/";>Hewlett-Packard</a> has provided several
-      high-end HPPA, IA-64 and IA-32 servers and workstations to Debian,
-      and HP employs several developers to work on Debian HPPA and IA-64
-      ports. For information about HP's involvement in the Linux Open Source
+      <p><a href="http://www.hp.com/";>Hewlett-Packard</a> hardware for port development, 
+      Debian mirrors, and other Debian services (HP hardware donations are listed in 
+      the [Debian machines](https://db.debian.org/machines.cgi) page). 
+      For information about HP's involvement in the Linux Open Source
       community, see <a href="http://www.hp.com/products1/linux/";>HP Linux</a>.</p>
-
-      <p>HP is one of the largest computer companies in the world, and it
-      provides a wide range of products and services, such as all kinds of
-      PCs, calculators, printers, scanners, plotters, various storage
-      products, network servers and equipment, software etc.</p>
+     
+      <p>Hewlett-Packard  is one of the largest computer companies in the
+world, providing a wide range of products and services, such as
+servers, PCs, printers, storage products, network equipment, software,
+cloud computing solutions, etc.</p>
     </partnerdesc>
   </div>

--- End Message ---
--- Begin Message --- 
This bug was closed by larjona-guest in the webwml CVS repository:

http://www.debian.org/devel/website/using_cvs

Note that it might take some time until www.debian.org has been updated.

CVSROOT:	/cvs/webwml
Module name:	webwml
Changes by:	larjona-guest	15/04/28 18:48:13

Modified files:
	english/distrib: pre-installed.data 

Log message:
	updated url for inforreg sl, see <44f930bb3c627a8fd0b204a91617afa8.squirrel@inforreg.net>

Modified files:
	swedish/intro  : cn.wml 

Log message:
	Fix validation

Modified files:
	english/partners: index.wml 

Log message:
	Update paragraph about HP. Closes: #781058

--- End Message ---
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