Thank you Alexander, here are my remarks:There is a syntax error at the start of this sentence.There is likely be an introductory session on Friday evening again for people who have not attended a BSP before.<h2>Organise a <q>DebianDay</q> in your city?</h2> <p>With Debian's 17th birthday coming up on <a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://groups.google.com/group/comp.os.linux.development/msg/a32d4e2ef3bcdcc6">"http://groups.google.com/group/comp.os.linux.development/msg/a32d4e2ef3bcdcc6">August the 16th</a>, the wider Debian community all over the world is invited to organise local <q>DebianDay</q> gatherings and one-day conferences for users, contributors and developers.</p> <p><a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianDay2010">"http://wiki.debian.org/DebianDay2010">Information and tips</a> are available in the Debian wiki, which already also contains some <a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianDayArtwork">"http://wiki.debian.org/DebianDayArtwork">Debian Day Artwork</a>.</p>There are 2 spellings used: "DebianDay" and "Debian Day".This doesn't sound good. Perhaps s/ the status quo regarding the implementation of / the status of the implementation of /As there haven't been enough volunteers for the team declassifying the archive of the private Debian mailing list, he just documented the status quo regarding the implementation of <a href=""http://www.debian.org/vote/2005/vote_002">http://www.debian.org/vote/2005/vote_002">that general resolution</a>. There shouldn't be a "the" before "Extremadura", since it is a common noun.That's similar to what has been done with features developed for the <a href=""http://lists.debian.org/">http://lists.debian.org/<20100624081405.GB5733@login1.uio.no>">Debian based installations in the Extremadura, Spain. "Intel based graphic cards" does not make sense to me. This should probably be simply "Intel graphic cards".Cyril Brulebois from Debian's <q>X Strike Force</q> called for help testing the <a href=""http://ikibiki.org//blog/2010/07/04/We_need_you_redux/">http://ikibiki.org//blog/2010/07/04/We_need_you_redux/">xserver-xorg-video-intel driver</a> for Intel based graphic cards. "two applicants" does not agree with "has", since the former is plural and "has" is the third person.Four applicants have been <a href=""http://lists.debian.org/E1OT1hh-0001zw-Gp">http://lists.debian.org/E1OT1hh-0001zw-Gp@merkel.debian.org">accepted</a> as Debian Developers and two applicants has been <a href=""http://lists.debian.org/E1OTQCx-00054Y-P6">http://lists.debian.org/E1OTQCx-00054Y-P6@ries.debian.org">accepted</a> as Debian Maintainer since the previous issue of the Debian Project News. 411 bugs minus 95 bugs makes more than 306 bugs. If you found a way to make RC bugs disappear, this would be worth a news item!According to the <a href=""http://bts.turmzimmer.net/details.php">http://bts.turmzimmer.net/details.php">unofficial release-critical bug counter</a>, the upcoming release, Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q>, is currently affected by 411 release-critical bugs. 95 of them have already been fixed in Debian's <q>unstable</q> branch. Of the remaining 306 release-critical bugs, 49 already have a patch (which might need testing) and 16 are marked as pending. On 2010-07-09 13:34, Alexander Reichle-Schmehl wrote: Hi! I just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian Project News to be release on Monday. I would appreciate reviews and translations. Instructions can be found on http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews Best regards, Alexander |