Re: Draft for lenny release announcement
On Wed, Feb 11, 2009 at 11:26, Alexander Reichle-Schmehl
<alexander@schmehl.info> wrote:
> I have added "For leisure time several new games have
Leisure time sounds formal and cumbersome to me. How about dropping
the prefix and going with "Several new..."? Otoh, that is a bit abrupt.
Unfortunately, I can't come up with a better suggestion, though.
> beed added including puzzle games as well as firt-person shooters. A
s/firt/first/
> notable change is the introduction of <q>goplay</q> a graphical games
s_</q>_</q>,_
> browser ofering filters, search, screenshots and descriptions for games in
s/ofering/offering/
> Would that be a compromise?
Of course, looks good imo :)
Richard
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