Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the mopidy source package.
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--- mopidy.old/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-12 07:22:16.176133080 +0200
+++ mopidy/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-17 07:52:14.518298353 +0200
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
Default: false
_Description: Should the Mopidy server be started at boot?
The Mopidy server can be run as a system service, automatically starting
- at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections at port 6600 and HTTP
- connections at port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
- localhost.
+ at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections on port 6600 and HTTP
+ connections on port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
+ the local machine.
s/at port/on port
light unjargonification : localhost -> the local machine
.
You have the option of starting the Mopidy server automatically on system
boot. If in doubt, it is suggested to not start it automatically on boot.
.
- This setting can be modified later by running 'dpkg-reconfigure mopidy'.
+ This setting can be modified later by running "dpkg-reconfigure mopidy".
Strandard debian-l10n-english use of quotes.....
--- mopidy.old/debian/control 2014-07-12 07:22:16.176133080 +0200
+++ mopidy/debian/control 2014-07-21 06:54:47.813336165 +0200
@@ -34,9 +34,10 @@
mopidy-doc
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients
Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
- your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
- Searches combines results from all music sources, and you can mix tracks from
- all sources in your play queue. Your playlists from Spotify or SoundCloud are
+ the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
+ .
+ Searches combines results from all music sources, and tracks can be mixed from
+ all sources in the play queue. Spotify or SoundCloud playlists are
also available for use.
Split in two paragraphs for readability.
Unpersonnalize (drop "your")
Package: mopidy-doc
@@ -49,6 +50,6 @@
Replaces: mopidy (<< 0.7.3-2)
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients - documentation
Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
- your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
+ the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
- The packages includes documentation for Mopidy.
+ This package provides the documentation for Mopidy.
Unpersonnalize.
STandard dle use : "this package provides"
--
Template: mopidy/daemon Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Should the Mopidy server be started at boot? The Mopidy server can be run as a system service, automatically starting at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections on port 6600 and HTTP connections on port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from the local machine. . You have the option of starting the Mopidy server automatically on system boot. If in doubt, it is suggested to not start it automatically on boot. . This setting can be modified later by running "dpkg-reconfigure mopidy".
--- mopidy.old/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-12 07:22:16.176133080 +0200
+++ mopidy/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-17 07:52:14.518298353 +0200
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
Default: false
_Description: Should the Mopidy server be started at boot?
The Mopidy server can be run as a system service, automatically starting
- at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections at port 6600 and HTTP
- connections at port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
- localhost.
+ at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections on port 6600 and HTTP
+ connections on port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
+ the local machine.
.
You have the option of starting the Mopidy server automatically on system
boot. If in doubt, it is suggested to not start it automatically on boot.
.
- This setting can be modified later by running 'dpkg-reconfigure mopidy'.
+ This setting can be modified later by running "dpkg-reconfigure mopidy".
--- mopidy.old/debian/control 2014-07-12 07:22:16.176133080 +0200
+++ mopidy/debian/control 2014-07-21 06:54:47.813336165 +0200
@@ -34,9 +34,10 @@
mopidy-doc
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients
Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
- your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
- Searches combines results from all music sources, and you can mix tracks from
- all sources in your play queue. Your playlists from Spotify or SoundCloud are
+ the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
+ .
+ Searches combines results from all music sources, and tracks can be mixed from
+ all sources in the play queue. Spotify or SoundCloud playlists are
also available for use.
Package: mopidy-doc
@@ -49,6 +50,6 @@
Replaces: mopidy (<< 0.7.3-2)
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients - documentation
Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
- your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
+ the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
- The packages includes documentation for Mopidy.
+ This package provides the documentation for Mopidy.
Source: mopidy
Section: sound
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Stein Magnus Jodal <stein.magnus@jodal.no>
Build-Depends:
debhelper (>= 8.0.0),
python (>= 2.7),
python-setuptools,
python-sphinx (>= 1.0),
python-pygraphviz
Standards-Version: 3.9.5
Homepage: http://www.mopidy.com/
Vcs-Git: git://github.com/mopidy/mopidy.git
Vcs-Browser: https://github.com/mopidy/mopidy
X-Python-Version: >= 2.7
Package: mopidy
Architecture: all
Depends:
${misc:Depends},
${python:Depends},
adduser,
debconf,
lsb-base,
gstreamer0.10-plugins-good,
python-gst0.10
Recommends:
gstreamer0.10-alsa,
gstreamer0.10-plugins-ugly,
gstreamer0.10-tools,
python-cherrypy3,
python-ws4py
Suggests:
mopidy-doc
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients
Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
Searches combines results from all music sources, and tracks can be mixed from
all sources in the play queue. Spotify or SoundCloud playlists are
also available for use.
Package: mopidy-doc
Section: doc
Architecture: all
Depends:
${misc:Depends},
${sphinxdoc:Depends}
Recommends: mopidy
Replaces: mopidy (<< 0.7.3-2)
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients - documentation
Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
This package provides the documentation for Mopidy.
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