Re: lacie-uboot : Please review the description
Christian PERRIER wrote:
> Quoting Justin B Rye (jbr@edlug.org.uk):
>> Package: lacie-uboot
>> Architecture: all
>> Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
>> Recommends: sometfpd
>> Description: LaCie U-Boot netconsole shell
>> LaCie network storage products offer a U-Boot netconsole, which can
>> be accessed using the tools provided in this package:
>> * lacie-uboot-shell - a simple interactive client which can connect
>> to the U-Boot netconsole using only a network cable;
>> * lacie-nas-updater - a script to update your product bootloader
>> or firmware using lacie-uboot-shell (requires a TFTP server).
>
> Only one comment: s/your/somethingelse ?
Yes, and now you draw my attention to it the phrase "your product
bootloader or firmware" is a bit odd anyway. And perhaps there should
be an "inline expansion" of NAS somewhere in there.
LaCie Network-Attached Storage products offer a U-Boot netconsole, which
can be accessed using the tools provided in this package:
* lacie-uboot-shell - a simple interactive client which can connect
to the U-Boot netconsole using only a network cable;
* lacie-nas-updater - a script to update the device's bootloader or
firmware using lacie-uboot-shell (requires a TFTP server).
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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