Hi Justin, [sorry for the double mail, Justin, hit the wrong button] On Thu, Oct 08, 2009 at 08:07:35PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: > Okay, here we go. Today's theme is separable verbs: "a setup", "a > login", but "to set (it) up", "to log (yourself) in". It's getting more and more frustrating... :) > > + SysCP also needs cron jobs. They are not installed > > + automatically because they restart the web server which you probably want > > + to keep controlled. > > It's not quite clear what the "which" is referring to there - the > web server or the restarts. I meant the web server but it doesn't really matter in this case, does it? > SysCP also requires cron jobs. These are not installed automatically > because they cause web server reloads, which you probably want to keep > controlled. Okay with me. > > SysCP is an easy-to-use system control panel for web and mail servers. It > > I think this needs a tweak: I'm running "web and mail servers" on > lots of machines, but I'm not in SysCP's target market. Maybe "for > ISP web and mail servers"? "For commercial web- and mail-hosting > servers"? I've gone with "ISP", but I'm not sure. ISP is fine, I think. Thanks again! Hauke
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