Here's my review. I insist on the rewrites I made at the beginning, for instance: --- templates.old 2007-05-29 07:09:25.594601760 +0200 +++ templates 2007-05-29 07:13:38.581891041 +0200 @@ -2,27 +2,28 @@ Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: Mantis administrator e-mail address: - Users will be prompted to send an e-mail to this address when an error - occurs that requires the intervention of an administrator. + Please enter the address of the administrator who will receive mails froms + users when an error requires some intervention. Long descriptions should avoid making reference to short descriptions. This is a style adopted in other packages. So any construction like "This is foo" should be avoided. As I reworded all such templates, my rewrite should probably be double checked. PS: my patch applies to the templates as reviewed by Kevin, then Justin.
--- templates.old 2007-05-29 07:09:25.594601760 +0200 +++ templates 2007-05-29 07:13:38.581891041 +0200 @@ -2,27 +2,28 @@ Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: Mantis administrator e-mail address: - Users will be prompted to send an e-mail to this address when an error - occurs that requires the intervention of an administrator. + Please enter the address of the administrator who will receive mails froms + users when an error requires some intervention. Template: mantis/webmaster Type: string Default: webmaster@localhost _Description: Mantis webmaster e-mail address: - This address is displayed at the bottom of all Mantis pages. + Please enter the address that is displayed at the bottom of all Mantis pages. Template: mantis/from Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: Sender address for bug report e-mails: - Bug report e-mails from Mantis will be sent from this e-mail address. + Please enter the address used as origin address for Mantis bug report e-mails. Template: mantis/bounce Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: E-mail address for bounce-handling: - Bounced e-mail is directed to this address. Typically, this should be set to - be the same as the administrator's e-mail address. + Please enter the address where bounced e-mails will be + directed. Typically, this should be set to be the same as the + administrator's e-mail address. Template: mantis/webserver Type: multiselect @@ -35,9 +36,9 @@ Template: mantis/passwordnote Type: note -_Description: Change the Administrator's password: - By default this package is installed with an account for the Administrator. - The password for this account is: root. +_Description: Administrator's password to change + By default, the mantis package creates an administrator account. + The password for this account is 'root'. . It is highly recommended to change this password immediately after - installation is complete. + completing the installation.
Template: mantis/admin Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: Mantis administrator e-mail address: Please enter the address of the administrator who will receive mails froms users when an error requires some intervention. Template: mantis/webmaster Type: string Default: webmaster@localhost _Description: Mantis webmaster e-mail address: Please enter the address that is displayed at the bottom of all Mantis pages. Template: mantis/from Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: Sender address for bug report e-mails: Please enter the address used as origin address for Mantis bug report e-mails. Template: mantis/bounce Type: string Default: mantis@localhost _Description: E-mail address for bounce-handling: Please enter the address where bounced e-mails will be directed. Typically, this should be set to be the same as the administrator's e-mail address. Template: mantis/webserver Type: multiselect Choices: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2 DefaultChoice: apache2 _Description: Web server to configure: Apache can be automatically configured to use Mantis by creating links in /etc/{apache-version}/conf.d/. Select all the versions of Apache you would like to automatically configure. Template: mantis/passwordnote Type: note _Description: Administrator's password to change By default, the mantis package creates an administrator account. The password for this account is 'root'. . It is highly recommended to change this password immediately after completing the installation.
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