Re: Bug#217521: ITP: gtk-imonc -- A Client for the one-diskette router `fli4l', using Gtk-2

[Johannes Rohr <j.rohr@gmx.de>]

Joe Drew <hoserhead@woot.net> writes:

> Johannes Rohr wrote:
>>   Description     : A Client for the one-diskette router `fli4l', using Gtk-2
>
> "client for the one-diskette router fli4l"

Right, thanks. But shouldn't the first word be capitalized?

>> GTK-Imonc is a graphical client for FLI4L, a popular one-diskette
>> Linux-based router for small networks that offers many advanced
>> features (see http://www.fli4l.de/). Gtk-Imonc connects to the
>> imond server (the controlling daemon) on the router. It uses
>> Gtk-2.0 and integrates well into the Gnome desktop. (Seperate
>> clients for KDE and WindowMaker also exist)
>
> I think you can change the last sentence to "It integrates well into
> the GNOME desktop (separate clients which integrate well into KDE
> and WindowMaker also exist)."

You mean GNOME has to be all upper case?

> Are those other clients packaged?

Unoffical debs exist. None of them is in Debian yet.

> Maybe mention them by name.

Maybe. But since they are not in Debian (and I don't intend to package
KDE software since I don't use KDE myself), I'd rather give an URL
where a listing of those clients can be found.

>>  It displays:
>>   * online status / traffic info
>>   * router status
>>   * calls and connections when logging is activated on the router
>>  You can control:
>>   * dialing
>>   * system shutdown
>>   * different circuits (LCR)
>>   * channel bundling
>>   * hup-timeout of ipppd devices
>
> Paragraph form might be a good idea for these.

Probably. 

Thanks for the feedback,

Johannes

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