Re: Suggested press release in reaction to RHAT dropping sparc and alpha

[Nathan E Norman <nnorman@incanus.net>]

On Mon, Dec 23, 2002 at 12:17:33AM +0000, Colin Watson wrote:
> On Sun, Dec 22, 2002 at 06:47:23PM -0500, Jaldhar H. Vyas wrote:
> > Ok here is the revised version:
> 
> A few corrections:
> 
> > The Debian Project (http://www.debian.org/) producers of Debian GNU/Linux,
>                                              ^ insert comma
> > the premier Linux distribution created by the community for the community
> 
> Probably another comma here.
> 
> > reaffirmed today its' ongoing commitment to supporting Linux on the Sparc
>                    ^^^^ "it's"

"it is ongoing commitment" ???

That should be "its" :)

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