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Re: D-I Manual - String freeze / Call to update translations (deadline: May 17)



On Fri, Apr 30, 2010 at 10:13:56AM +0200, Frans Pop wrote:
>
> It's time for another upload of the Installation Guide.

Hi Frans, please consider applying the attached patch (or something
along the lines), which IMO greatly clarifies the IP adresses used in
the example.

Cheers
-- 
Miroslav Kure
Index: boot-installer/arm.xml
===================================================================
--- boot-installer/arm.xml	(revision 63041)
+++ boot-installer/arm.xml	(working copy)
@@ -221,12 +221,16 @@
 You will need to hit Ctrl-C again to interrupt the boot. Then:
 
 <informalexample><screen>
-ip_address -l 192.168.2.249 -h 192.168.2.4
+ip_address -l <replaceable>192.168.2.249</replaceable> -h <replaceable>192.168.2.4</replaceable>
 load -v -r -b 0x01800000 -m http /initrd.gz
 load -v -r -b 0x01008000 -m http /zImage
 exec -c "console=ttyS0,115200 rw root=/dev/ram mem=256M@0xa0000000" -r 0x01800000
 </screen></informalexample>
 
+where <replaceable>192.168.2.249</replaceable> is the IP address of
+the installed system and <replaceable>192.168.2.4</replaceable> is the
+IP address of the HTTP server containing the kernel and ramdisk files.
+
 </para><para>
 
 The installer will now start as usual.

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