Bug#553306: clarify use of mirror/udeb/suite

[Vincent McIntyre <Vince.McIntyre@atnf.csiro.au>]

Package: installation-guide
Severity: wishlist

Tags: patch

In relation to #552787, I've attempted to improve the relevant text
in the preseeding appendix of the manual. It's a bit wordier (sorry
translators).

Cheers
Vince


Index: trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml
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--- trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml	(revision 61122)
+++ trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml	(working copy)
@@ -896,12 +896,14 @@
 </para><para>
 
 The parameter <classname>mirror/udeb/suite</classname> determines the suite
-for additional components for the installer. It is only useful to set this
-if components are actually downloaded over the network and should match the
+for additional components for the <emphasis>installer</emphasis>.
+By default the value for <classname>mirror/udeb/suite</classname> is the
+same as <classname>mirror/suite</classname>.
+<classname>mirror/udeb/suite</classname> may be set to a different value,
+but it is only useful to do this if installer components are going to be
+downloaded over the network. The value should match the
 suite that was used to build the initrd for the installation method used for
 the installation.
-By default the value for <classname>mirror/udeb/suite</classname> is the
-same as <classname>mirror/suite</classname>.
 
 </para>