[D-I Manual] new wording for boot-new/ppp.xml
Hi all,
There are some typos in boot-new/ppp.xml.
What do you think of this diff?
Regards,
--
Philippe Batailler
--- /home/phil/SVN/debian-installer/installer/doc/manual/en/boot-new/modules/ppp.xml 2004-11-07 07:43:18.000000000 +0100
+++ ppp-new.xml 2004-11-07 09:37:06.000000000 +0100
@@ -8,22 +8,14 @@
If your computer is not connected to a network, you will next be asked
whether you wish to install the rest of the system using PPP. PPP is a
-protocol often to establish dialup connections with modems, in order
-to configure it you will need some information on how to setup this
-connection from your Internet Services Provider (ISP). If you don't
-have a modem in your computer, your should probably skip this step.
-
-</para><para>
-
-<!-- Move this to needed-info.xml? (jfs) -->
-
-If your ISP only provides software to configure the dialup access for
-some operating systems you will need to ask them for the information
-needed below which will includes: phone number, username, password and
+protocol used to establish dialup connections with modems. In order
+to configure your connection, you will need some information from your
+Internet Service Provider (ISP), including phone number, username, password and
DNS servers (optional). Some ISPs provide installation guidelines for
Linux distributions. You can use that information even if they don't
specifically target Debian since most of the configuration parameters
(and software) is similar amongst Linux distributions.
+If you don't have a modem in your computer, you can skip this step.
</para><para>
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