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Bug#223762: English l10n



On Fri, Dec 12, 2003 at 08:36:52AM +0100, Christian Perrier wrote:
| +_Description: Network configuration method:
| + Networking can either be configure by DHCP or by manually
| + entering all the information. If you choose DHCP and
|   debian-installer is unable to get a working configuration
|   from a DHCP Server on you network you will be offered to configure
|   your network manually after the atempt to configure it by DHCP. If

This whole paragraph is full of errors in English.  Try this:

Networking can either be configured by DHCP or by manually
entering all the information.  If you choose DHCP and
debian-installer is unable to get a working configuration
from a DHCP server on your network, you will be given
the opportunity to configure networking manually.

Note
configure by -> configured by
you network -> your network
comma after "your network"
"offered to configure" -> "given the opportunity to configure"

Please make sure the templates get properly written in English before freezing 
them.  It would be good to run them all through a list like 
debian-l10n-english.  I've been seeing a *lot* of English errors in the 
debian-boot templates.



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