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Bug#602094: apt_preferences man page could use some love from a native English speaker



Quoting PJ Weisberg (pjweisberg@gmail.com):
> 

> --- apt_preferences.5.xml	2010-10-14 05:31:19.000000000 -0700
> +++ apt_preferences.5.new.xml	2010-11-01 22:18:40.000000000 -0700
> @@ -56,16 +56,14 @@
>  The APT preferences file does not affect the choice of instance, only
>  the choice of version.</para>
>  
> -<para>Preferences are a strong power in the hands of a system administrator
> -but they can become also their biggest nightmare if used without care!
> -APT will not questioning the preferences so wrong settings will therefore
> -lead to uninstallable packages or wrong decisions while upgrading packages.
> -Even more problems will arise if multiply distribution releases are mixed
> -without a good understanding of the following paragraphs.
> -Packages included in a specific release aren't tested in and
> -therefore doesn't always work as expected in older or newer releases or
> -together with other packages from different releases.
> -You have been warned.</para>
> +<para>Preferences are a strong power in the hands of a system administrator,
> +but they can also become your biggest nightmare if used without care!  APT will
> +not question your preferences, so some settings may lead to uninstallable
> +packages or wrong decisions while upgrading packages. Even more problems can
> +arise from carelessly mixing packages from multiple distributions.  Packages
> +included in a specific release aren't tested in and therefore won't always work
> +as expected in older or newer releases or together with other packages from
> +different releases.  You have been warned.</para>
>  
>  <para>Note that the files in the <filename>/etc/apt/preferences.d</filename>
>  directory are parsed in alphanumeric ascending order and need to obey the


I have a few concerns:

- the use of "you": "your biggest nightmare", "your preferences"....
- change of meaning: "more problems will arise"-->"more problems can arise"



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