Grégoire Duchêne napisal(a):
I updated the draft, with a new layout and new colors : http://duchene.g.googlepages.com/index2.htmlYou still can view the first draft here : http://duchene.g.googlepages.com/index.html.Cheers, -- Grégoire.
I don't feel to have an artistic soul... I like it, but I think that "Get Debian GNU/Linux!" should be bigger and more colourfull (maybe a .gif picture), in the previous version it was more visible. Besides, in my opinion, your work should see a professional painter or somebody who can evaluate it.