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Bug#823693: ITP: asciiquarium -- Enjoy the mysteries of the sea from the safety of your own terminal!



Ben Finney wrote:
Niklas Sombert <niklas@ytvwld.de> writes:

Description : Enjoy the mysteries of the sea from the safety of your own terminal!

Please re-write the description to conform with Debian Policy §3.4 and
Developer's Reference §6.2.

In particular, the synopsis should not be a sentence. Instead it should
be a noun phrase stating what the package installs, as characterised in
Policy §3.4.1 and Developer's Reference §6.2.2.

This bug report doesn't appear to have the proposed long description for
the package; please write one (as per the above documentation) and put
it in this bug report.

Then I would change the description to:

Description: displays an aquarium with ASCII art
 This program simulates an aquarium with fish and various other things
 and displays it using ASCII art on a terminal.

  - Niklas


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