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Bug#653943: ITP: zanshin -- to-do list manager

On Sun, Jan 01, 2012 at 10:17:38PM +0200, Fathi Boudra wrote:
>  Zanshin is a powerful yet simple application for managing your day today
>  actions and notes. It helps you organize and reduce the cognitive pressure of
>  what one has to do in his job and personal life.

The genitive of "one" is "one's", not "his". You need "...what one has to do
in one's job and personal life."

> You'll never forget anything
> anymore, getting your mind like water.

This means nothing to me. Could you rephrase it?


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