Bug#637351: ITP: urfkill -- urfkill is a daemon for the management of the radio killswitches.

[Keng-Yu Lin <kengyu@lexical.tw>]

2011/8/11 Christian PERRIER <bubulle@debian.org>:
> Quoting Keng-Yu Lin (kengyu@lexical.tw):
>
>> Thanks for the suggestion. I modified the description as below.I hope
>> that it is better explained and understandable.
>>
>> Package: wnpp
>>  Severity: wishlist
>>  Owner: "Keng-Yu Lin" <kengyu@lexical.tw>
>>
>>  * Package name    : urfkill
>>   Version         : 0.2.0
>>   Upstream Author : Gary Lin <glin@suse.com>
>>  * URL             : http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/urfkill
>>  * License         : GPL, LGPL
>>   Programming Lang: C
>>   Description     : wireless killswitch management daemon for laptops
>>
>>  urfkill daemon provides the management of the rfkill-related hotkeys
>>  and the killswitches in a more configurable way for the common RF
>>  devices, e.g. WiFi, Bluetooth, WWan, etc. urfkill handles the various
>>  key codes (KEY_WLAN, KEY_BLUETOOTH, KEY_RFKILL, etc)
>>  and toggles the killswitches based on a pre-defined policy.
>
> Maybe just avoid starting sentences with "urfkill" as it is always
> wierd to have sentences beginning with a lowercase letter.
>
> A common trick is using "The <foo> program|daemon". Also avoid "e.g."
> which is a latinism that's too often used in English..:). I propose
> parenthesis...another option would be using "such as". Replace "etc."
> with an ellipsis (...) as it avoids the tricky use of a dot before and
> after a closing parenthesis.
>
> That would give:
>
> The urfkill daemon allow managins the rfkill-related hotkeys
> and the killswitches in a more configurable way for the common RF
> devices (WiFi, Bluetooth, WWan...). It handles the various
> key codes (KEY_WLAN, KEY_BLUETOOTH, KEY_RFKILL, etc)
> and toggles the killswitches based on a pre-defined policy.

Thanks for the refinement. I hope the description looks better now. :-)

Package: wnpp
  Severity: wishlist
  Owner: "Keng-Yu Lin" <kengyu@lexical.tw>

  * Package name    : urfkill
  Version         : 0.2.0
  Upstream Author : Gary Lin <glin@suse.com>
  * URL             : http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/urfkill
  * License         : GPL, LGPL
  Programming Lang: C
  Description     : wireless killswitch management daemon for laptops

  The urfkill daemon allow managing the rfkill-related hotkeys
  and the killswitches in a more configurable way for the common RF
  devices (WiFi, Bluetooth, WWan...). It handles the various
  key codes (KEY_WLAN, KEY_BLUETOOTH, KEY_RFKILL...)
  and toggles the killswitches based on a pre-defined policy.